Bad Mood reworked


wine end day –

few forgot until

looked out.

rained mood

but went.

found myself instead,

better made.

wine, talked,



(For this poem, I took an unpublished blog post I’d written, and took every 5th word and wrote it down. Then I added spacing and punctuation to see if I could get it to make poetic sense. It doesn’t really address the topic of faces, unless you picture mine going from crabby to better as the poem progresses. I did not use chiasmus in this poem.)



Writing201 Poetry: faces (topic), found poetry (poetic format), chiasmus (literary device)

One thought on “Bad Mood reworked

  1. mentalbreakinprogress October 11, 2015 / 11:26 pm

    I love this idea! What a cool way to create poetry and it totally works here! I also want a glass of wine for some reason 😉 lol xo

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